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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #15 on: September 25, 2009, 11:37:43 PM »
There are 9 up now--zero through 8 (sorry; I'm a programmer; we start counting at zero.  :rolleyes008: It seemed fitting for the prolog. )
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #16 on: October 03, 2009, 02:06:26 AM »
Episode 9 posted late Saturday night. Start looking for more episodic content.
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #17 on: October 11, 2009, 12:59:37 AM »
Episode 10 now online. A little late due to last-minute edits, to make it more consistent with ideas I got later in the series.

Newbies can find them here:

http://mutuallyassuredsurvival.com/tikiwiki/tiki-index.php?page_ref_id=357
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #18 on: October 11, 2009, 01:07:28 AM »
For the newbies: they're chapters of a series that makes more sense if read in order, like the chapters of a novel. Start at zero and work your way up. Otherwise, the story doesn't make much sense. But some folks apparently read them randomly. I wonder if they read books that way.  :rolleyes008:
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #19 on: October 13, 2009, 10:08:47 PM »
OK, I have read the first few chapters.  This is a strange tale.  Seems to have the flavour of part-futuristic, part-science fiction, big part fairy tale, part unidentifiable locale, etc. etc.  Can't wait to keep going.  Who is the author?  Is it...vous?   :shocked013:
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #20 on: October 14, 2009, 02:38:02 PM »
One way of thinking about it would be in terms of "alternate world". It's not set in the future, or the past. An aside: "Star Wars", by George Lukas, is set in the PAST ("a long time ago, in a galaxy far away..."). That's why some of the characters have Sanskrit names (Padme = "Lotus") and the words to the fight song (Dual of the Fates) at the end of Phantom Menace are in Sanskrit. You should spot a lot of our-world anachronisms, such as the honor guard soldiers wearing distinctively ancient-Roman helmets and uniforms. They're supposed to look something like the praetorian guard. That's intentional.

Time is somewhat arbitrary from a God's-eye view of things.  :happy112:

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New episodes show up once a week, usually late Friday (Pacific Time), which means most folks don't see them until Saturday. One of my fan/critics wanted them to be longer, so most of the later episodes are longer.

These are edited versions of a much earlier version, as I had to learn how to write fiction on the fly, having no experience doing it. Handling issues such as caste and regional dialects (they have both) and names for imaginary props is not easy and took some experimentation to get right. Class dialect is taboo in modern American fiction ("racist", "classist", even if it really does exist...ah...), so I had no obvious models to work from, not that I read fiction much anymore anyway.

Handling love scenes turned into a major nightmare. Not familiar with suitable models, and when I looked up a reference on that sort of thing, I thought "this is trashy, not erotic". The problem has to do with the fact that in order to light up enough neurons to stimulate interest, you have to use words that have lots of neural connections. The English language is cursed with a dichotomy between vulgarized Anglo-Saxon and "clinical" concatenations of Latin and Greek that have little depth of meaning or emotional ties.

The analogy would be between the sentences

"The infant perished in the conflagration".

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"The baby burned to death".

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C'est moi! A votre service.  :greet009:

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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #21 on: October 17, 2009, 01:43:07 AM »
Episode 11 online:

http://mutuallyassuredsurvival.com/tikiwiki/tiki-index.php?page=Chapters+11-20&structure=HW001

Took a while to get all the thees and thous straight from the yous. It depends on who is talking to whom. Since the language is supposed to be rich in words related to relationships and feelings, I had to add at least the obvious.
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #22 on: October 24, 2009, 01:47:13 AM »
Episode 12 posted.
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #23 on: October 31, 2009, 03:32:28 PM »
Episode 13 showed up last night.
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #24 on: November 07, 2009, 02:57:21 AM »
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #25 on: November 15, 2009, 02:10:28 AM »
Episode 15 posted.
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #26 on: November 21, 2009, 03:23:26 AM »
Episode 16, Covenant, posted.
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #27 on: November 21, 2009, 08:20:14 AM »
I haven't had time to read the revised version yet.  But I thought the original was spectacular.  You don't give yourself enough credit for your talent. 
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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #28 on: November 21, 2009, 12:56:45 PM »
Thank you.

The edits are actually fairly minor, but they correct a lot of mistakes, since there are both foreward and backwards looking references that all have to match, and consistency among ideas that needs to be enforced. J.K. Rowling had the same problem with Harry Potter, and her editors and proofreaders missed a few (she openly admitted them on her website but most readers didn't catch them without her pointing them out). They also standardize a lot of ways of handling certain issues. There is an absolute minimum of made-up words, so that it doesn't sound like "Jabberwocky". I'm not as talented as Lewis Carrol! Even made-up words need a certain cadence, rhythm, and pattern. It's sort of like the folks who have to give some serious effort to try to make Klingon sound like a realistic language. I should have done what George Lucas did and just used a real but mostly forgotten language (Sanskrit--though he often mixes other old languages such as "Anakin" = Greek "ana" without, + Anglo-Saxon "kin". No kinfolk (orphan)).

I think the one I posted last night was the last one posted of the original series, even though I had about an equal number more on the back-burner. It ended with the wedding consecration. I seem to recall though that you got a sneak peak of some later issues before they were quite finished.

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Re: Homeworld is back
« Reply #29 on: November 21, 2009, 02:05:10 PM »
Yeah, I did.
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